Satanic Kotatsu
Jan 24, 2015 22:16
Today, I got a kotatsu out from closet.
A kotatsu, it's a traditional furniture of Japan, also a satanic tool.
It's small table with an electric heater underneath and covered by a quilt.
It's really really comfortable.
Therefore, once I sit under the kotatsu, I wouldn't want to leave from there.
The aspect seems a parasite who live with kotatsu.
Those who live with kotatsu is sometimes called "kotatsumuri," which is made up of two words, "kotatsu" and "katatsumuri." (katatsumuri means snail.)
Every winter, the lazy people were mass-produced by kotatsu, so I want to deal it very carefully.
Ahhh, I must be in heaven...
By the way, the man whose car was bumped by my one contacted me.
As repair costs, He requested ten thousand yen (almost 85 dollars) to me.
Fortunately, the repair place was his car's license plate only.
I'm grateful for surviving.
A kotatsu, it's a traditional furniture of Japan, also a satanic tool.
It's small table with an electric heater underneath and covered by a quilt.
It's really really comfortable.
Therefore, once I sit under the kotatsu, I wouldn't want to leave from there.
The aspect seems a parasite who live with kotatsu.
Those who live with kotatsu is sometimes called "kotatsumuri," which is made up of two words, "kotatsu" and "katatsumuri." (katatsumuri means snail.)
Every winter, the lazy people were mass-produced by kotatsu, so I want to deal it very carefully.
Ahhh, I must be in heaven...
By the way, the man whose car was bumped by my one contacted me.
As repair costs, He requested ten thousand yen (almost 85 dollars) to me.
Fortunately, the repair place was his car's license plate only.
I'm grateful for surviving.
No. 1 jamieleshaw's correction
- A kotatsu, it's a traditional furniture of Japan, also a satanic tool.
- A kotatsu, it is traditional Japanese furniture, it is also a satanic tool.
- It's really really comfortable.
- It's extremely comfortable.
- Therefore, once I sit under the kotatsu, I wouldn't want to leave from there.
- Therefore, once I've sat under the kotatsu; I do not wish to leave.
- Every winter, the lazy people were mass-produced by kotatsu, so I want to deal it very carefully.
- Every winter, the lazy people are mass-produced by kotatsu, so I want to deal with it very carefully.
- By the way, the man whose car was bumped by my one contacted me.
- By the way, the man whose car was bumped by my car contacted me.
- As repair costs, He requested ten thousand yen (almost 85 dollars) to me.
- As repair costs, he requested ten thousand yen (almost 85 dollars) from me.
Not bad :)
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me! (^-^)
Thank you so much for correcting me! (^-^)
No. 2 Notizzettel's correction
- Today, I got a kotatsu out from closet.
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Today, I got a kotatsu out from closet.
You don't really need the comma :))
- A kotatsu, it's a traditional furniture of Japan, also a satanic tool.
- A 'Kotatsu' it's is a traditional furniture of to Japan, but also a satanic tool.
- It's small table with an electric heater underneath and covered by a quilt.
- It's small table with an electric heater underneath, and covered by a quilt.
- It's really really comfortable.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Therefore, once I sit under the kotatsu, I wouldn't want to leave from there.
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Therefore once I sit under the kotatsu, I wouldn't want to leave from there. I'm very comfortable and don't want to leave.
It sounds awkward, this sounds better :))
- The aspect seems a parasite who live with kotatsu.
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The aspect seems a parasite who live with kotatsu.
I don't know what you mean here?
- Those who live with kotatsu is sometimes called "kotatsumuri," which is made up of two words, "kotatsu" and "katatsumuri." (katatsumuri means snail.)
- Those who live with a kotatsu is are (plural!) sometimes called "kotatsumuri," which is made up of two words, "kotatsu" and "katatsumuri." (katatsumuri means snail.)
- Every winter, the lazy people were mass-produced by kotatsu, so I want to deal it very carefully.
- Every winter the lazy people were mass-produced by the kotatsu, so I want to deal with it very carefully.
- Ahhh, I must be in heaven...
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- By the way, the man whose car was bumped by my one contacted me.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- As repair costs, He requested ten thousand yen (almost 85 dollars) to me.
- As repair costs, he requested ten thousand yen (almost 85 dollars) from me.
- Fortunately, the repair place was his car's license plate only.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I'm grateful for surviving.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Great :))
kanotown
Thank you so much for kindly correcting me! :D
> I don't know what you mean here?
I wanted to say something like "A human live with (parasitize) a kotatsu as if a parasite parasitize a plant." I wanted to compare a human who sit under the kotatsu to a parasite.
I hope this makes sense.
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The aspect seems a parasite who live with kotatsu.
I don't know what you mean here?
> I don't know what you mean here?
I wanted to say something like "A human live with (parasitize) a kotatsu as if a parasite parasitize a plant." I wanted to compare a human who sit under the kotatsu to a parasite.
I hope this makes sense.
No. 3 Timmy's correction
- A kotatsu, it's a traditional furniture of Japan, also a satanic tool.
- A kotatsu, is a traditional furniture of Japan (or: traditional Japanese table), it is also a satanic tool.
- Fortunately, the repair place was his car's license plate only.
- Fortunately, the repair place (or: part that needed repairing) was his car's license plate only.
やっぱり、冬は♪(*^-^)ｏ旦┏━┓(^-^*)こたつとミカンですね
kanotown
Thank you so much always correcting me! (^-^)
こたつにみかんは最高です！
Thank you so much always correcting me! (^-^)
こたつにみかんは最高です！
Timmy
You are welcome!
You are welcome!